A Beautiful Dream

The house was dark. The air was cool. The air conditioner hummed in a soft timbre. The only source of light was the blue moon, illuminating through the window and onto my face. I couldn't help but stare at it on this sleepless night. Imagine the wonders behind that big blue circle staring at us all night. What was behind it? Science? Religion? Astrology? My mind made up all types of fantasies as it drifted off into a different land, the land of dreams.
 

There I stood in the desert, in the middle of an invisible line that divided the light of the sun and the deep darkness of the moon. I was alone. The place encaptured the beauty of both opposite sides. Accompanying the blue moon in the darkness were bright stars painted with the galaxies of space, while accompanying the sun in the light were the most beautiful clouds and pink skies that would put the greatest artists to shame. Which one should I venture to? I picked the darkness of the moon as I wouldn't want to suffer a death like Icarus. A white horse flew down and landed next to me, blowing sand to my face. Its wild eyes stared at me, encouraging me to climb on its back. I trusted it for some unknown reason. The constant feeling of always about to fall made me anxious as we flew away to the darkness, yet the sensation of flying was the most enchanting feeling in the world. I see the stars and the moon slowly drawing closer and closer as the exotic land below me started getting further and further away. In only a split second I realized that I landed on the moon.
 

A light blue hue danced on the surface and covered my feet. I walked around a little bit and when I turned back, the white pegasus was already on his way back to Earth. Like an alien I walked around the Moon aimlessly until I heard a little voice from under me. "Ouch," it said. "Sorry?" I replied, "Who is that?" I looked under yet I saw nobody there. The rough sand under me suddenly felt hot and the light blue aura around it changed to a darker shade. I walked and looked back yet it was still just a pile of gray sand. "I am the Moon," the voice echoed, shaking the ground from under me. "Whoa," I said, "You can talk?" "In a dream, yes I can. Sadly, I can't in the real world," the Moon replied in an undertone of sadness. "Why?" I asked. "A dream is not limited by human dimensions. In a dream, your soul leaves the body and ventures in its true form. In your true form, the possibilities are endless and you can see the world as it truly is," the Moon said. "So all of this is just a dream?" I asked, "Am I currently in my bed right now?" "This is a dream," the Moon wistfully replied, "But all of this is real. I can see you on Earth right now." "Wow," I replied, in awe of what I just heard. My mind couldn't fathom all the possibilities and all the questions I have for this strange entity. Strangely, I could understand everything it said. "You must have a lot of questions," the Moon said in a light-hearted tone, "Take your time." "Who created all of us?" I asked. The Moon laughed and the ground suddenly shook hard from under me, "That is a secret you're not ready to know, kid." "Then what can I know?" I asked back. My body suddenly felt light like a feather. To my surprise I was flying mid-air. "Let me take you to my friend," the Moon's voice echoed through the air.
 

I was floating through space, guided gently by a tug from an invisible force. In this journey I saw the other planets and the stars. I saw the multi-colour hues of the different galaxies and the different contrasting colors of foggy-like clouds that painted it. I saw the colossal stirring force of the black holes. I imagined how wonderful it must be to live in this magical place yet how scary it must feel like to do so. It was so quiet, so empty. Everything felt so big yet it pales in comparison to the entire space we were in. I just felt so small. We finally reached a yellow ball of light covered in violet and pink clouds that extended to my reach. Moving closer I felt an energy surging through my veins, like an adrenaline rush after a thrilling experience. "This is my friend Hugh," the Moon's invisible voice said, "But you humans call him Polaris." "The North Star?" I exclaimed, "I read about you in the book my Mom bought for me!" Hugh's deep voice laughed in a warmth similar to the heather on winter nights. "I have a question," I said, "Are there aliens?" The both of them stayed quiet for a while but Hugh finally answered, "Let humans be humans. Let aliens be aliens. You don't need to know the answer. If there are aliens, and I'm not saying there are, you have different instincts, different types of consciousness. You have different paths and goals. It's like roads diverged, like that poem by that guy Frost."
 

"How about-" I asked again, before Hugh interrupted me, "Look kid. There are many things humans don't know, and sometimes it is better that way. You humans are interesting creatures. I see you destroy and do wretched things. But I also see you grow and unite. You are powerful forces beyond your understanding." I listened to Hugh and even without seeing his face, I could feel the emotions behind his words. "I'm sorry," I said.
 

Suddenly the whole scene shifts. I was back on Earth. I was standing on a green field with a clear view of a transparent lake, reflecting the chaotic beauty of space. It was pitch dark, yet I was able to see. "I've seen this before," I whispered. "I know," Hugh's voice echoed from behind me. His human form was someone I recognized from the photos in my house. It took me a few seconds to piece the puzzle together, it was my late grandfather. His white suit and his vigor made him look strong despite his age. "Where is Bradley?" I asked. Hugh pointed to the sky where a big blue moon watched us motionlessly next to the thousands of stars and the thousands of hues of colors of the galaxy. "I'm here," the sky seemed to rumble as Bradley's voice echoed through the air. "You've seen this in your dreams before," Hugh commented. "How can I forget? This is the most beautiful view I've ever seen in my life," I said in awe, unable to let my eyes off this view. "We don't have much time left. I want to tell you a few things before I go," Hugh said hurriedly. "Why are you in my grandpa's body?" I asked, "I never even knew him."
 

"There are many things you don't know. Just know this, dreams are real. In ways you don't understand, all of the universe and everything in it is alive. You're a good kid Alex. If you ever feel alone or sad, just look up to the stars and know that we are always guiding you, even in ways you don't understand. You're never alone. When you grow up, and I know that you will become a strong and kind man, don't forget to do one important thing," Hugh looked at me with fatherly eyes. "What is that?" I asked. "Keep dreaming. That is the hardest thing to do in a dark and cruel world," Hugh smiled at me.
 

His words unexpectedly stung and touched my heart. I cried and hugged him, "Visit me from time to time." From a distance, I could hear my mom's voice, "Alex! Alex!" "Remember us Alex!" Bradley's voice rumbled. The scene faded away and I opened my eyes. The familiar scent of my room filled the air. My mom's face looked down on me, "Wake up. It's time for school." She wiped a tear of my cheek and said in a softer tone, "Why are you crying?" I looked around in disbelief at what I just witnessed, "I just had a beautiful dream."
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 Nic Carlton · ago
Great work. Love it!!
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 Fifi Susanto · ago
Love the story
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 Jack Macan · ago
Good story will
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 Caca Malika · ago
Nice story Will!
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you
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 Evelyn Eve · ago
Nice writing^^
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you 🙏
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 Stanley Salim · ago
Awesome work👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank youu very much!!
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 Rina Oktavia · ago
Beautiful story 👍👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 Vika Nanda · ago
Good story ! Can't wait for the next story!
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 Malika Husna · ago
Ceritanya bagus 👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Terima kasih 🙏
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 Hui Ni · ago
I can't wait for you to come out with other stories,this one is amazing
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 Reza Dwi · ago
Great job! Love the story!
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you 🙏
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 hernanda fita · ago
I was at the edge of my seat the whole time i was reading story, very entertaining from the start to end. Keep up the great work !
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you 🙏
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 Sukardi Huang · ago
fascinating story!👏
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Wilda Lie · ago
beautiful ending!!
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 William Susanto · ago
thank you very much
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 Gabriella Rara · ago
Love this story! A very entertaining and emotional story. The ending is so deep
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Fate Mee · ago
A very captivating story 👍
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 William Susanto · ago
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 spy I'm · ago
Keep the good work! From your 2days roommate.
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you bro🙏
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 Audrey Gamalia · ago
Amazing Story !
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much!
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 Kumala Puspa · ago
A very beautiful story, both fascinating and heartfelt ! Good job and keep up the good work!
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Meida Dewi · ago
Wow… interesting, good job Will 👍🏼
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Gloria C · ago
What a lighthearted story!
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 William Susanto · ago
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 charly m · ago
beautiful ending!!
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Ardita Nia · ago
good job
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Alessandro Archiles · ago
fascinating story!👏
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Vienna Widjaja · ago
What an interesting story!! 👏
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much!
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 Nicole Cabriolle · ago
Very interesting! 👏👏
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 Michael C Angsono · ago
story with depth 👏
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 William Susanto · ago
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 brittany bun · ago
wonderful story🙌
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Mimi Lim · ago
Good job on this story 👏 A very unforgettable read and very interesting!
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much 🙏
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 Angel · ago
Wonderful story! A very beautiful way of inserting morals with a touch of fantasy! Not only did I enjoy reading it but I also had a little trip down memory lane!! Family is a very crucial aspect of our life… Good job on this story! I hope you publish more work 🙂😄👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much 🙏 i hope my writing can be a source of inspiration to people and have meaning 🙏
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 Tan Bun Hock · ago
good and nice story
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you
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 Tanja S · ago
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼love it!
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Deeya Bhasin · ago
Nothing compares to the author’s method in revealing the moon and the carefully crafted conversation that followed. Secondly, the point of how humans are powerful beyond our understanding was incredible. We’re often told our loved ones become stars in the universe guiding us from above, and it was comforting to see that narrative at play here. Overall, this is an impressive and well-written story.
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much 🙏, your analysis really matches what i am trying to convey in my story, truly appreciated 🙏🙏
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 Lina Puji astuti · ago
The author has a very distinctive writing style, his unique choice of words were able to capture the dreaminess of life, I can't wait for his next work!!! 😄😄
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much 🙏
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 Samuel Ali · ago
Nice Story will
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Holly cps · ago
Good Story 👍
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Liu Qiaochu · ago
Very good and impressive story
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Budi Irawan · ago
Ceritanya bagus mantap salam sukses
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 William Susanto · ago
Terima kasih!
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 Emmanuel Ikeh · ago
Love love this story man!! Keep up the great work! Beautiful!!
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you 🙏
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 Santi Riyanti Santi · ago
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 William Susanto · ago
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 calya putri · ago
Semangat berkarya 👍👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Terima kasih banyak!!
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 Jenna Si · ago
It’s really impressive 👍👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much!!
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 Muyao Tan · ago
Great work!!
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 William Susanto · ago
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 Helman Winarto · ago
Good story 👍👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 Hadi Ridho · ago
Gbu from hadi/yogi indonesia
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 William Susanto · ago
Gbu too 🙏
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 Villy Intan · ago
Good Story👍 success always
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much!
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 Rania Puspa · ago
I am really entertained by this story... it made me dive deep into the realm that the author has created. This story has made me think about the philosophy of life, good job
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 William Susanto · ago
thank you very much 🙏
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 Salma Kumala · ago
The writing style of the author is incredibly unique and different to anything I have read before.The way he writes really captures what it really feels like to be in an actual dream. keep going, you have potential for greatness
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 William Susanto · ago
that is the effect I intended to put into the story. in a dream, the setting always changes constantly and things that doesn't make sense always occurs, however it always felt like it made sense when we ourselves are in that dream. so, i tried to incorporate that feeling into my writing style. thank you very much for your comment 🙏
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 Rina Rahmawati · ago
I really like how your story touches more philosophical topics.Reading this story really made me start to think about life and also the meaning of dreams in general. keep up the good work👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Yess hahahaha, I tried to include topics I am interested in into the story. I remembered looking at the moon as a child and wondering where it came from, so I felt like I was inspired by that childhood experience. Thank you very much 🙏
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 Louisa Wong · ago
moving and beautiful. Keep going, William
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much!
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 y sukardi · ago
Your writing is incredibly engaging and thoughtful. You have a natural ability to convey ideas clearly while keeping the reader hooked. Keep up the great work william
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much!
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 Farly Tan · ago
Nice. 👍👍👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 pinkie tan · ago
impressive very creative
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much!
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 Darius Gani · ago
Beautiful Story William , I really love it , Keep Up the Good Work
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much!
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 Luther chen · ago
Good story.. well done will...
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 Frans Hartono Gunawan · ago
Wow such an interesting story
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 Venny Intam · ago
Great job
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much!
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 Halim S · ago
Woah..
It really grabbed my attention
What a great piece of work !

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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!!!
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 Evita Tamara Paramita · ago
写得真不错!
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 William Susanto · ago
谢谢你!
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 Angeline Gomuljo · ago
你的写作能力好牛啊!
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 William Susanto · ago
谢谢您!
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 Selena Clorinda · ago
What an interesting story! So Impressive
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much!
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 Andy Tandiono · ago
What an impressive work. I was completely absorbed in your story.
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much 🙏
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 Yutian TAO · ago
👏🏻Great job!
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!!!
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 Christine Megawati · ago
I couldn't stop reading, so engaging. What a perfect writing 😍👏
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much
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 Kevin Lembata · ago
No words, just applause 👏🏻👏🏻 such a great work
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much🙏
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 William Tanoto · ago
Cool story.. good luck
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much🙏
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 Johnny Johnny · ago
Nice story..good job
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you so much!
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 Star Fancy · ago
Good luck.. nice story
~irene

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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 Win Satrya · ago
Awesome, all de best william
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 Briandy · ago
My words won't be enough. Keep up the good work!!
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you so much!
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 Albert Suherman · ago
Good Story
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you
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 helena melani · ago
Good story
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you
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 Willy Tri putra tantono · ago
The structure of your writing flows beautifully, making it easy to follow
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 christine livionna · ago
What an impressive work. I was completely absorbed in your story.
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you so much 😁
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 Aini Aini · ago
Good story william👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you
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 Richard Tantono · ago
Your writting style is captivating, I was completely drawn into the story
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you🙏
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 Tan Ahjussi · ago
It's really pleasurable to read, it flows really nicely
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you🙏
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 Wirawan Tantono · ago
Well crafted piece!
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank youu🙏
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 Liang Lim · ago
Good story…. 👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you
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 suhardi susanto · ago
Great Job William ! I really enjoy reading this , this story need recognition !
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you so much 🙏🙏
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 Stanford Toh · ago
This story really captured my heart,it made me feel like I was in a beautiful dream myself.
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you 🙏🙏
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 Tjiu Hendragus Kusuma · ago
"Your story 'A Beautiful Dream' beautifully captures the quiet, almost mystical experience of gazing at the night sky. The imagery of the cool, dark house and the gentle hum of the air conditioner sets a perfect stage for the reader to enter that peaceful, contemplative moment. The way you describe the blue moon not only illuminates the scene but invites us to explore the mysteries it holds. I found myself pondering alongside the narrator – wondering about science, religion, and the universe beyond. This piece is truly a 'beautiful dream' that leaves a lasting impression. Best of luck in the Long Story Short Award – you’ve crafted something special!"
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much 🙏
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 Satyajeet Kr Singh · ago
Your story is a captivating blend of imagination and emotion. The dialogue between Alex, the Moon, and Hugh invites deep reflection on dreams and connection. The inclusion of Alex's late grandfather adds a touching layer of guidance. The message about the importance of dreaming in a challenging world resonates powerfully. Overall, it's a beautifully crafted journey filled with wonder and wisdom. Great story William! an amazing piece of work, I would say.
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much🙏 Your insight really inspires me
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 Yustian Archilaus · ago
Excellent story William!
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much sir! I really appreciate it
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 Margaretta Dj · ago
The way that the author described the details absorbing me to his world. The curiosity and the emotions are also well poured. Reading this story is like diving into he author’s teenage mind that is full with questions of life, searching for answers and the longing of roots of his family. Beautiful peace, keep growing ❤️
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you🙏
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 Marcus Seah · ago
Awesome work!
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 SIP Perdana · ago
Awesome story @_@
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 steve ganiputra · ago
Keep it up!!
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you🙏
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 Eric Jamuar · ago
From the moment I began reading, I was completely drawn into William's world. The way the author described the dream—familiar yet changed—was so vivid that I felt like I was walking into it, sensing the same emotions as he did. It was as if I could hear my own thoughts, feel the weight of William’s dreams.
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you very much 🙏 I wanted to make the reader feel like they are dreaming
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 Selvi · ago
Nice story 👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you 🙏
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 Linda Mayasari · ago
Great story!!
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 William Susanto · ago
thank you!
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 Eve Hidayat · ago
Good one Will! Keep up your good job! 🌟🌟🌟
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 William Susanto · ago
thank you so much!
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 Rahyan Ashraf · ago
Really enjoyed reading the story! Keep up the good work.
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you!
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 Ziyuan Zhu · ago
Really enjoy reading the story
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you so much 🙏
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 yosep pramana · ago
MANTAP. GOOD STORY. HEN HAO. ✅️
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 William Susanto · ago
Terima kasih banyak! Aku terinspirasi dari impian yang kusendiri alami hehe
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 LEE LEE · ago
非常好故事,这使我的大脑旋转,爱来自瓷器
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 William Susanto · ago
谢谢你!我希望创作出一些可以让人忘记时间的故事!😂
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 Fenglei Yan · ago
Beautiful story
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you so much! I wish for everyone to enjoy reading it 🙏
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 John Li · ago
Such a great story
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you so much! I had many inspiration from my family and friends to create art
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 Shaan Khan · ago
Strongly rooting for this author. He has great potential.
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you so much!
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 E L · ago
很好,我非常喜欢这个故事。
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 William Susanto · ago
谢谢你🙏
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 Angeline Hidajat · ago
When I was reading this story, I could feel the emotions of the characters... I believe that this writer has a lot of potential and very talented. 👍👍👍
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you so much, this story is actuallly inspired by me. Some of the settings in this story is inspired by the dreams that I had before 😂
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 Wiwi Bebel · ago
This story is very fascinating. It's very well written and the structure is perfect. Good job!!!
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you so much, I'll be happy to hear your feedback!
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 Listia Ardi Wirawan · ago
A beautiful story 😊👍🏻
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you 🙏
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 Jimmy Iswara · ago
The story is so interesting and enjoyable to read
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you so much 😁
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 Julio Susanto · ago
👍 very good
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you 🙏
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 Annabel Susanto · ago
I really like this story!! It carries a very deep meaning and is a very enjoyable read. I love the moral of the story and my perception of the moral is that “Family is always there for you”, keep up the good work 😄😁
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 William Susanto · ago
Thank you, I truly believe that family is the most important thing! I wanted to share this lesson to the world to see🙏
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 Narita Sugiharto · ago
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 Julius Hidjat · ago
Very good reading..
Image of William Susanto
 William Susanto · ago
Thank you for taking your time to read my story🙏