The Life Of A Balloon

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Elizabeth

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I am a balloon. I am born without anything inside-Ideas, opinions, choice. As years progress I am inflated with more. I soar the more I am filled with knowledge. Eventually I am off the ground. I am floating through the air. Sometimes I can get deflated by the hardships put on me. But those hardships can always be repaired with a little duct tape and persistence. As I grow older, the less I need a person below me to carry my string. Eventually I am launched into the world all alone. I float higher and higher meeting all different types of birds along the way. Some are kind and help launch me further into the sky. Some try and peck at me so I deflate again. Sometimes I give in and let them peck me. Those times teach me not to let silly birds rule me. As I am older I see another balloon in the sky. The wind pushes me toward this new balloon as trying to tell me what love is. I connect with this new balloon and we continue our journey together. Time flies and I am filled with my new partners own knowledge and love. We spot two smaller balloons in the distance playing in the clouds and having fun. The wind pushes them toward us and us four are connected. I spend my time trying to inflate the little balloons with my own knowledge of the world. I teach them to be creative and stand for themselves. I watch them deflate sometimes, but they always are reinflated with love and hard work. The little balloons float higher and higher , until eventually they don’t need my partner and I to fill them anymore. The two of us watch them float up above us, into a big blue sky. Suddenly, I come apron a great white abyss. I am floating farther away from my partner. I can sense his panic when they do not see me next them. The white sky is very bright, but looks peaceful. I let myself float up a little bit more. I have reached my point as balloon. I saw nearly all the sky, met nearly all the birds, and I am happy. Pop!

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Thara · ago
I like your story "The Life Of A Balloon"...
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Peter Silletti · ago
Very proud of you Liz...never stop writing!
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Keith Simmonds · ago
Here I am again to renew my appreciation for your text, Elizabeth! Good luck!
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Kathy · ago
I love your story.. Gammie is hoping you win..❤️
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Mary Gahagan · ago
Excellent. I love the analogy!
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Marie-Louise Mills · ago
I enjoyed your story! Good Luck! After the final selection and when you have a chance to relax read my story, The Feel of An Olive Pit.
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SallyE · ago
What a lovely story. Thank you, Elizabeth.
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carys · ago
I LOVE YOU CHERYL
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Poetrylover6996 · ago
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Poetrylover6996 · ago
😎😎🗿🗿
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