Like an angel from the sky


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I'm a tram driver in The Hague Netherland, but first of all I'm a poet, a writer. I believe in the magic of the words, I know they can make you feel bete  [+]

Image of Summer 2020

Like an angel from the sky
Like a bird on my window
Like a flower in July
On a sunny afternoon

Suddenly you passed me by
And I don’t know what to do
And I don’t know what to try
To be with you very soon

No I won’t tell you no lie
I can’t stop thinking of you
Every time I close my eyes
Under the light of the moon

I wonder if you can fly
Like a bird on my window
Like an angel from the sky
On a sunny afternoon

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Jeanne en B · ago
Sympa :-) j'ai juste un souci avec ce vers mais mon anglais est parfois faiblard, n'y aurait-il pas une négation de trop ?
"No I won’t tell you no lie"
Bonne route :-)

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Michel Armand Demai · ago
Oui, certainement, mais c'est l'anglais des rues, celui des pauvres, de ceux qui disent aussi "I ain't gonna give you nothing !" et "He don't want to see no police !"... :)
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Jeanne en B · ago
Merci pour ces explications :-) bonne soirée
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Tony Martello · ago
I hear the smooth sound and lyrics about when you see her, Michel. Full 5 votes. Check out my story, "Maize of Color" in the short fiction category of this contest and vote it you like it. Tony
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Michel Armand Demai · ago
Please give me some likes, if you liked it