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John's Fear

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One day there was a boy named John.He was 8 years old and his biggest fear was the dark , So when John went to sleep he would turn on his light on.Until one day his mom said "it's time to get over your fear" John never though the day would come but it happen John's mom left the room and cut off the light. No hall light nothing but a dim street light at the end of his street. John panic to very badly until he heard a bam! On his window he thought it was a monster but it was a tree. As he set there in his bed and though nothing of it John realize he got over his fear and he went to sleep

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Mary Kay · ago
Good character development.
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Nae · ago
Thanks make sure to like
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